Feedback (Part 1)

For me, receiving feedback on my coursework was very important. It has allowed me to check what I need to correct and change on my coursework in general. Going through the coursework in class has really opened my eyes on the changes I need to correct, and it helped me understand how to create a better magazine, with the help of my fellow Media Studies classmates and my teacher. The feedback that I was bought will be divided into 2 parts. This is because this post will specifically be about my blog posts and the other part will be about my magazine.

Blog posts

For my blog posts, the feedback I received from my classmate Leo was overall positive. He said that my Creative Critical Reflection was very descriptive and was very informative. I was also told by him that my analysis of different magazines was very good and also was descriptive.

However, the feedback I received from my teacher was quite different. She told me specifically that

- My Creative Critical Reflection was missing (I added to the home page of my blog)

- Photoshoot planning - why are the places I picked related to homelessness

- I have to add how am I engaging with my audience

- Who are models for my photoshoot and why I picked them

- My finished product should be on home page